Not bad for your first time. Despite what people have said, you do not have too MUCH eyeshadow, the problem is, you took it out too far. When you're just starting out, you don't want your eyeshadow to go that far past the outer corner of your eye. Keep it on your eyelid. Make sure to blend out the outer edge of your eyeshadow. If you don't have a brush, you can use your finger. A nice trick when you first start out is to take a medium brown in the crease. Its an easy way to tone down color. Adding some eyeliner on your water line is going to help the over all look. I would add a few coats of mascara to really emphasize your eyelashes. Keep going and keep experimenting! We all had to start somewhere
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