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Mhm it's cheeeesy but o well hahha. Tell me what you think. I think i might have posted this one before, I'm not sure. I wrote this for my ex a while ago, guess she didn't like it =).

Let's run away together, to a place far away
Me and you alone, that would be a good day
Let's go to different places of the world
Just us two, me and my beautiful girl

Let's run away together, to a lovely place
I'll do nothing but stare at your beautiful face
Your smile, it's so sweet and so kind
I want you so much, you never leave my mind

Let's run away together, to a city unknown
Your hair smells so nice, i love your cologne
Your eyes, so deep, yet so sweet
When I'm with you, my heart skips a beat

Your lips are so soft and they taste great
We can stay up together kissing until it gets late
Let's run away together, just me and you
Hand in hand we'll walk, because i love you

awwwww :)
cute.
I wish someone wrote something for me like that.

it is good i give it a seven.
a couple lines ruin it lik your hair smells so nice i love your colonge
and about the lips that they taste great and we can stay up together kissing until it gets late
those lines are cheesey but the rest has heart in it

thats so sweet
change the cologne to perfume and the change the "kissing until it gets late" to something that means for forever, thats just my opinion

It is sweet, some of your rhymes sound a bit amateur, but all in all great job.
I would be flattered to recive this from someone.

awwww it was super cute!!

Any guy who would write something like that is deffinitally a cutie =]]

any guy who has enough guts to post it forthe world to see and spectacular

awwww it was super cute!!

Any guy who would write something like that is deffinitally a cutie =]]

any guy who has enough guts to post it forthe world to see and spectacular

thats beautiful <font color = hotpink?

6/10

10

Cologne should be perfume...but this is SO cute and sweet!

10!